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you wrote me love letters from the passenger seat,
pressing stars to my eyelids and hearts to my forehead.
you wrote me lies.

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like the summer months, you never stick around long enough to make a lasting impression.
winter always takes over, cold
fingertips washing away all past evidence of the blistering friction once there.

(the only way I made it through was remembering that
you’re only another calendar away; that you’ll come back.
I don’t think I’ll make it through this time.)


o

I’d write you every word in the french-english dictionary if only one would spark a memory.
you seem unable to reminisce and incapable of nostalgia.
(really, I think they’re powers you passed onto me, increasing mine tenfold.)

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you’re like something acidic, burning in my throat.
but all the way down, you’re smoldering the word
beautiful.

o

you held me close with trembling hands,
telling me how I was your living reincarnation of
rainbowsandfireworksandfairytales.

(I was the only one who noticed that they all just
explode in a shimmery mist of magic, forgotten
moments later.)


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I don't want to be forgotten.
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LaChoquante Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010
wow.
this created a knot somewhere in my stomach.

you found the perfect balance between things you told and things you left open for the reader's mind to fill in their own story.
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bing-bam-boom Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010
thank you (:
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SedahLiah Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009   Writer
Bravo. :clap:
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bing-bam-boom Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009
thanks! (:
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SedahLiah Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009   Writer
No, thank you. =D
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Llywenlla Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009
Crikey.

I'll be able to comment when I scrape my jaw off the floor. Wow.
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bing-bam-boom Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2009
haha, awe! XD
thanks!
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Darkness1-2 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2009
"only another calendar away"

This part gave me goosebumps. I love it
:heart:
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bing-bam-boom Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2009
thank you!
<3
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ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2009
very, very wonderful.
'you’re like something acidic, burning in my throat.
but all the way down, you’re smoldering the word
beautiful.'
i might've loved that best. then again, i might have loved every part of it best.
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